My Visual Poem Was on the oceans. I think the visuals make an impact because my visuals are of the beautiful beaches of kauai. I had pictures of Anahola beach, Shipwrecks beach, and another beach but I don't remember the name of it. I have to say that my visuals were kinda awesome because I took them myself.
For my special effects I used transitions and the kens-burn effects. The trasitions change the mood because it gives my Visual Poem a little kick and excitement and it's not as boring when the B-roll is just being switched really quickly. I think the audience would enjoy my transitions because there mostly fades so it fades in to another picture so it looks pretty nice.
My finished poem didn't really turn out how i wanted it to but it still came out pretty nice. I'm not sure if it was long enough or not. Also some of the B-Roll i planned on taking didn't really work out. I'm just happy I completed the assignment.
good lighting in all the clips
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good clips
good lyrics
ReplyDeletesounds are too loud
good visuals
Compliment: Awesome Audio effects
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Need More Video
Compliment: Good Lyrics
Compliment:Awesome audio effects
ReplyDeleteCriticism:There was no videos
Compliment: The words of your poem were very descriptive
great pictures
ReplyDeletewheres the videos
great sounds
I liked the background noise
ReplyDeleteYou talk too fast in the poem
I like the transitions used throughout the poem
nice pictures
ReplyDeleteyou could lower your audio
nicely done
Nice photos
ReplyDeleteLower your music and need more b-roll
Good job!!
The pictures were really nice.p
ReplyDeleteThe audio was too quiet and other sounds where loud.i
I liked the first opening picture.g
Awesome B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteYou could've used more video then pictures.
Really good background noise.
You had a great shot at the begining
ReplyDeleteThe music is loud and its really short
I like the effects you used
I like your pictures in your video.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is to read a little slower.
I also like the music in the back round.
Great shots of the ocean. Could have turned down some of your background noise so it leveled out with your voice. Great lyrics to your poem.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how the sound effects you used applied to your poem.
ReplyDeleteAlthough they were good I think the volume should have been lowered a little when some of them were used I couldn't hear you.
Other than that I really liked your poem!
I like the b-roll you got.
ReplyDeleteYou could have equalized the audio.
I like the the words you used.
I loved the photo of the wave in the beginning, it looked so well timed! Your words were sort of slurred and spoken fast so I couldn't understand some of your words. Great shots of the ocean up on the cliffside it looked like?
ReplyDeleteI like your pictures they are very nice
ReplyDeleteCould of used movement in your video
I liked how you ended it
Has good pictures of the beach
ReplyDeleteNeeds more footage
Has good audio and sound effects
I like the content of your A-roll.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better is the speed of your reading and the volume of your music/sound effects.
I really like the B-roll!
good audio
ReplyDeletecould of have that beach sound a little more quite
good b-roll
Good shots of the ocean
ReplyDeleteThe sound is to loud
Good words
I liked the sound of the waves in the background!
ReplyDeleteI think you talked a little loud and a little to fast.
I loved the first picture you took with you go pro!
good pictures and sounds, its kinda hard to hear you, I like your lighting
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